The Devil's Angel

The Devil's Angel

98.7K Reads 2.5K Votes 20 Part Story
omea By omea1357 Updated Jul 30

She was beautiful, She was innocent, She never cursed, But then she felt for someone, 
Someone she shouldn't be with 

DEVIL 

He was dangerous, He was bad, He was Evil and that made him glad, He kills, He didn't new he was going out with an innocent HIS innocent 

ANGEL 

They meet at a royal ceremony 
They locked their eyes together 
But then her boyfriend came 
He was angry 
he kissed her lips 

Trouble is about to begin!

A whole conversation between me and my boyfriend right there. Puppy eyes and pouted lips always work 😂....then you do something evil
Cringe I might have to stop reading because this story is not for me
RoseBAwesomest RoseBAwesomest Sep 05, 2016
Sooo..... You skipped two and went to three. You could have put an authors note and then made chapter three two.😶 I'm not trying to sound rude, I swear.
RoseBAwesomest RoseBAwesomest Sep 05, 2016
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE  LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE  your story so far!
RachelOutcast RachelOutcast Dec 17, 2016
Ok tf is this? I came expecting an amazing story based on how well the cover and description were done and then I get a story that could have been written by a two year old. I hate to hate but this just needs work.
RachelOutcast RachelOutcast Dec 17, 2016
This whole thing is shitty, if you can write chapter 3 but not 2, why not just make cheaper 3 become 2? And before you write* anything learn how to spell write.