BITE ME

BITE ME

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Elise By eliseanton Updated Sep 04, 2016

Sometimes odd things pop into my mind. Mostly in that twilight state, craving sleep but needing to stay awake. Those I remember, I write down, a habit formed after many years of snatching sleep between caring for an ill parent. They're not all pleasant. Most surface from memories and I've had my share of bad ones. Others are observations; snippets of lives. Some arrive because... they just do.

  • confessions
  • humour
  • justwriteit
  • life
  • memories
  • nonfiction
  • notebook
  • random
  • rants
  • stories
  • thoughts
  • truestory
  • truths
  • wattys2016
KLCandela KLCandela Apr 15, 2016
You told so much in so few words. That is an art form I am trying to learn. Well done.
rosaimee rosaimee Mar 26, 2016
Wow! I love how you put a kiss as a whole metaphor of life. Great piece. A lot to think about.
DioneiValler DioneiValler May 03, 2016
wow, a moving love story in 10 paragraphs. great achievement.
TashInTheClouds TashInTheClouds Nov 29, 2016
I experienced a startling flashback when I read this.  The chapter is quite a start...  Thank you.
Vvgloria Vvgloria Jul 14, 2016
I literally cried over this one. Its beautiful yet heart-wrenching.
BindingTies BindingTies Jan 29, 2016
Very touching what the mind remembers and the heart holds onto!