Immortal Love

Immortal Love

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Abby●◇● By abbs_4234 Updated 2 days ago

She was the girl everyone loved. She was also the girl everyone wished to be. 

But everyone has their secrets and dark pasts. Those secrets will die with her when she completely disappears from the human world. 

Lesson number one: Never walk alone on the dark side of Chicago. 

As if being attacked by a group of raging vampires wasn't enough, she gets thrown into the world of fangs and blood itself as she faces being a newborn. 

Not to mention being a newborn of an infuriatingly hot, sadistic, and arrogant vampire master. 

He was the mystery she couldn't solve. He was dark and cruel, but those were just the top layers of the sadistic vampire. 

And she was going to find the real him even if it meant dying again. 

Lesson number two: Try not to fall for a vampire master named Theo. 

Sink your fangs in and get a feel of the vampire world. 

Will anyone make it out alive? 

Well, I guess we will have to find out,

But don't forget;

Lesson number three: Love bites.



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With introducing your story, it seems kind of cliche. But I haven't read the story so i'm yet to make corrections or have an opinion with more knowledge of what you're writing.
What do you mean by "love bites"? That we should love bites, or simply love bites;p
This was actually funny, I love her thoughts, they are funny(: