Who cares what they think

Who cares what they think

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LOLOL By YoosungLOLOL Completed

I've been looking for a Sockathan fanfiction where they make fun of Sock for being slightly overweight but haven't found any...so, I'm fixing that. :-] enjoy. This is an au so Sock isn't a killer hasn't killed anyone. Talk of suicide possible suicide. Huehuehue I'm evil I have to keep you on your feet.

I feel like this could be a lot better if you organized it more.  The paragraphs are SUPER long and the sentences feel so draggy.  Every sentence sounds the same to me because they're all written the same way at the same length.  I feel like I'm reading a list of events rather than a fanfic.
Please Jonathan ! HUG HIM AND GIVE HIM ALL THE LOVE HE NEEDS!
Well...this is all the same paragraph, which makes me very confuzzled and lost.
Sock, fat? I wouldn't say, maybe a little pudgy, but that only makes him cute.