Marry you for Baby (Book 1)

Marry you for Baby (Book 1)

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Choco Lily By ChocoLily Completed

*Book 1 of Marry You Series* 

Elizabeth Candler had never thought she would end up pregnant. Even worse, the baby's father is Adam Kingsley, CEO of the company she currently worked at. The said CEO was also rumored for being gay as he shown almost zero interest in female. But since he slept with her, it proves he does love women, but is it because of the influence of alcohol?

But when Liz told him about her surprising pregnancy, he wanted them to get married, just for the baby's sake. Could Liz change his mind of getting married to her instead of just for their baby's sake?

RiahusnaFitri RiahusnaFitri Feb 09, 2016 10:22AM
I really want to read it, and I am reading it now, but can i have one request? Can i.......point out things that is misspelled or missed grammatically? If i actually make sense.. .----. Haha pls reply
zemy-chang zemy-chang Aug 28, 2016 06:30AM
I couldn't just look away. 
                              It is understood not the other way round.
Do you really have to make the girl in a story too dumb? Geez! It's so insulting. To think that you would pair her to a high and mighty son of a badge?!
Can I make a suggestion?
                              Instead of using "as" and "for" so frequently.... Try using words like "since", "while", "because" or "when". 
                              It will help to make your sentences read better, as well as add a little variation to the paragraphs. 
                              I'm already loving the plot though!!!
She keeps switching p.o.v.'s. Before or during? It's confusing ;-;
itz_aquo_sua itz_aquo_sua Jan 16, 2016 06:37PM
The grammar is really not de best. It makes it difficult to understand the story