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Too complicated {sugamon}

Too complicated {sugamon}

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Ms_Infires By Ms_Infires Updated Jun 26

"What the hell is wrong?!"


"Then why are you avoiding me?"

...It's just all too complicated...

ShelbyRichardson5 ShelbyRichardson5 6 days ago
Just constructive criticism. It becomes very confusing to read when two or more people say is in the same paragraph. Maybe try starting a new paragraph when a new person starts talking.