Too complicated |sugamon| [EDITING]

Too complicated |sugamon| [EDITING]

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-yoomina- By -yoomina- Updated Jun 26

"What the hell is wrong?!"

"Nothing"

"Then why are you avoiding me?"

...It's just all too complicated...

Just constructive criticism. It becomes very confusing to read when two or more people say is in the same paragraph. Maybe try starting a new paragraph when a new person starts talking.