What if Derek had left with Addison Seattle. What if Meredith was prgenet at this time but he didn't know. How is her life 5 years later? And what happens if he is coming back to Seattle?
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A better way to word this would be "... and that made Meredith smile too."
Space between and helpful. Also that last sentence is hard to understand. Did she want to go to or be at the hospital now?