Voices on the Mountain

Voices on the Mountain

2K Reads 36 Votes 7 Part Story
Emily By Katluver2121 Updated Jan 06, 2011

Sam, a girl who jumps headfirst into danger, decides to follow a noise that she and her friends hear on the mountain that shadows their summer camp. Unfortunately, what she finds is definitely not a natural cause, -but on the way, she finds new friends, romance, and a few jaw dropping twists of fate.

batcrypt batcrypt Jan 22, 2012
I really like that one sentence "She boasted long golden brown hair and hazel coloured eyes." It's a nice bit of description. And that last sentence? Suspenseful.
CryssTall CryssTall Jan 13, 2011
Ironic how the character's name is Sam, and mine is too! :P Anyways, good beginning - Voted! Let me read the rest
Katluver2121 Katluver2121 Jan 07, 2011
@harrypotterismylife  THANKS!!!!!!! OMG U GOT AN ACCOUNT!!!!!!! ( i could totally tell it was u) lol
XXOohLaLaXX XXOohLaLaXX Nov 11, 2010
This is really good, I wanna know what the noise is now!! :)
Katluver2121 Katluver2121 Nov 07, 2010
@egygirl thank u for pointing those out i did not notice until just now so thx!!!
darkwish darkwish Nov 06, 2010
oo
                              very interesting.
                              maybe liven it up a bit by using unsual names
                              :)