Shadowed Suspicions

Shadowed Suspicions

25.3K Reads 263 Votes 1 Part Story
Rachel D.K. By rachloves2write Completed

Ally Baker has the nagging suspicion that she is being stalked. Unfortunately, she has no proof. It might just be her imagination. But if it isn't, is there anything she can do about it before it's too late?

Apairofblueeyes Apairofblueeyes Jun 23, 2012
I like how you managed to fit a whole book into 6 pages. That's impressive. Nicely written.
lovehappilyeverafter lovehappilyeverafter Jan 29, 2011
omg! who would say that 6 pages could hold such an awesome story!!
JarOfHearts96 JarOfHearts96 Dec 29, 2010
Wow! I totally didn't expect that :O
                              But it was so freekin' awesome. Best 6 pages ever XD
LoveIsWorthThePain LoveIsWorthThePain Nov 23, 2010
I'm in shock that it was her. lol i was all 0.o!! Is that it? But it was a good story. :)
LaurenDePaul LaurenDePaul Nov 23, 2010
you've got the skill to write out a whole book, shoot for the stars, you cant fall any farther unless you stop trying
Zanintia725 Zanintia725 Nov 21, 2010
Brilliant :) You didn't drag it out or make it too short, and you didn't need a ton of words to make you point! I love it!!