A Mermaid's Tale

A Mermaid's Tale

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sk8rgirl10 By sk8rgirl10 Updated Jun 11, 2013

Misty and her best friend Rain have lived their entire lives keeping their mermaid secret. But when love and a freak storm hits.. Will they keep it, or will they have to spill?

NeymalisDontcare NeymalisDontcare May 28, 2017
I think they were the was to put the net there to catch animals form the sea!
Elena3577 Elena3577 Mar 31, 2017
It would be so ironic if they were the ones who put that net there!!!!!!!!!!!!🤔😨😍🤗😜😘😱💋😇😬😈
hailey7p hailey7p Jun 15
Two 16 year olds(although her friend might be a little older or younger) share a house and no one in the neighborhood is suspicious? Does she even go to school or is it rural? I guess I’ll keep reading to find out maybe.
wingedalpha wingedalpha Jun 17, 2016
Haha, if it was 8:30 and your in seventh grade, here in Florida, you'd be soooooooo late for school!
demigod_power_25 demigod_power_25 Aug 30, 2016
This whole paragraph needs to be changed into present tense.
demigod_power_25 demigod_power_25 Aug 30, 2016
I'm not trying to be rude but it's dive down instead of dived down.