Fizzy Like Cola (Old Version) ✔

Fizzy Like Cola (Old Version) ✔

5.6K Reads 282 Votes 14 Part Story
Scarlett Rose London ❤️ By Iwritevariety Completed

PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS IS A ROUGH DRAFT OF THE STORY, IT'S UNEDITED AND DOES CONTAIN SOME POTENTIAL CLICHES. I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY IN THE NEW YEAR WHICH WILL BE LONGER AND CLEANER, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!


Good girl, bad boy, a love story that changes the course of time.

Emeli has always dreamt of the perfect boy coming along and sweeping her off of her feet. A hardworking, talented student, she always stays on the right side of the tracks with her strict parents. That dream comes to a head when new boy Wayne crashes into her life but he's anything but good. Expelled from five different schools and with a broken family, his reputation could cost him a safe, secure future.

So when they both fall in love, their worlds start to expand and spin, causing big decisions, big fights and big memories.

Fizzy Like Cola, written and completed in 2013. Entry for Wattys 2013. Didn't make the final round. First completed novel written by Scarlett Rose London.

This amazing cover was designed by @DayDreamer48

SammieBell1 SammieBell1 Feb 08, 2014
Simple. i really like how you write, thank you for the dedication by the way!!!
cl0ud_nine cl0ud_nine Sep 07, 2013
This is great so far! I like the idea and everything, just one bit of constructive criticism, POV's, try not to switch all the time, it makes it a bit easier to follow, if you know what I mean? Apart from that, I like it :D
                              
                              Voted :)
DoubtfulScoundrel DoubtfulScoundrel Aug 13, 2013
O.O Whoa. The next  hit POP song. Get it? Ahhh. It's still really catchy.
MTchan MTchan Aug 08, 2013
A piece of advice. If you can, don't use the pov's a lot. Like Emilie , then Wayne . It can be confusing, and sometimes disturbing. V
VictoriaKaer VictoriaKaer Jul 14, 2013
@Iwritevariety It's good to do your own thing, but your reader is going to want to know what the characters look like. We're curious like that, lol.
Iwritevariety Iwritevariety Jul 13, 2013
@VictoriaKaer
                              
                              Thank you for leaving an honest review.
                              
                              What I am trying to do is write in a different way. I am not copying all of the other writers of romance/teen fiction who tend to put lots of descriptions in. I am independent.