Persephone Jackson

Persephone Jackson

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Shiper☆is☆Shiping By shiper12 Updated Nov 29

Okay so Percy Jackson is a girl! Annabeth is Annabeth Jason is Jason and Nico is Nico only Percy has changed ok?
Nico and Percy will be going something this story!
Anyway
If you want to see what happens you have to read it
☆Sneak peek☆
( "Greta this war is over!" Percy screamed. Her black hair was wiping in the wind. Arms littered with scars from previous battles standing by her two best friends Nico Di Angelo and Annabeth Chase. "oh no it has just begun when you filthy demigods!" Grata shouted.
" Jason get some wings up and try to lift off her off the ground I will try-) sneak peek over

Am I the only one who reads Greta every time and think it (or just reminds of) sounds a lot like Gretel from Hantzel and Gretel?
                              I keep picturing a little girl with braids in her hair, with a cute little hat trying to take over the world.
piper142 piper142 Aug 25
Sorry if I spelled the second name wrong but I'm pretty sure that it's Gaea
Okayyyyyy then, well @shiperyou have your very own editer! Lol and love the story
A lot is two words sorry this just one thing that bothers me your story's great though
I suggest putting that between these two words and make match into matches
You forgot the period after please because Annabeth is ending her sentence. Even if she wasn't finished speaking you forgot some sort of punctuation.