The Orivate

The Orivate

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Camille-Olivier By Camille-Olivier Updated Nov 05, 2010

Many people take things for granted, like the clothes on your back, the food you eat and the people that love you. It isn’t till you have nothing will you appreciate the little things you do get. Like your life. Life is something you shouldn’t take for granted because it will be taken away from you. It might be when you’re old and withering away, when you are fresh out of the womb, or even when you are at the highlight in your life when you think nothing can go wrong. When you take your life, to get away from the horrors of the mortal world you’re selling your soul. You will be in a place far worst from what you were originally trying to escape. Where your mind is your foe as well as your only companion. You can not escape the awfulness of the world of the dead. At least that’s what I thought.

- Jamie-Lee

AnnieKR AnnieKR Nov 13, 2010
Your vocab is awesome :)
                              
                              'Tis was an intriguing start and you should upload.... soon?
                              
                              Please ;D ?
                              
                              The cover looks fantastic and I love your hair color, hahah :)
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Nov 09, 2010
Whao!
                              The summary alone dragged me in and that's something I find difficult to do! The story is also well written with great vocab! 
                              (:
InconceivableNotions InconceivableNotions Nov 08, 2010
hey great start!!!! keep writin! lookin 4wrd 2 the nxt part ;) xx