The Alphas dancer (Finished) and Editing :)

The Alphas dancer (Finished) and Editing :)

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bigsister101 By bigsister101 Completed

book one

    slytherinsnake55 slytherinsnake55 May 29, 2016
    I don't know if dance has the same terms as theatre, but an act is usually way more than 5 minutes
    LilLee1432 LilLee1432 Dec 12, 2016
    That moment youre a dancer... and youre name is taylor.... and you might go to a dance college in NY....
    TheBibliobibuli TheBibliobibuli Jul 22, 2016
    Ok I like the story, but one of my pet peeves is when people put the dialogue in one large paragraph. When you are editing this, every time someone says something, you start a new paragraph, or you press enter. Please fix this! 😁🤕😥
    Damonsoontobe Damonsoontobe Mar 24, 2016
    Why do I feel like in in the world of Marvel comics. With Sara LANE and Jack LANCE
    LisaSchoeman LisaSchoeman Sep 03, 2015
    check your spelling and the dvelopment of your story. younneed to have a platform to work off and you dont have it
    jojosar jojosar May 22, 2015
    Sarah and I not me and Sarah my friends do this to me all the time