Friends With The MAFIA

Friends With The MAFIA

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I_Listen_Music_Alot By I_Listen_Music_Alot Updated 6 days ago

Meet Elizabeth Quinn Robertsdale. Quiet Shy Nerd Girl. Bullied at her old school because she was different. They move to new City and she hopes that everything is different. But She Was Wrong
  
  Now meet Rider River Blade. He is the Leader of the Most Dangerous Mafia there is. 
  
  Read to find Out how these Two Meet and What Happens.

ahmadjaser ahmadjaser Apr 10, 2016
I really love youre first part ;) but u should do proof reading is better ;)
IOnlySpeakSarcasm IOnlySpeakSarcasm May 29, 2016
Ah sorry my reading skills... This is evidence of brain farting right here right now ppl!!!!
Ti3sh5_f3rgi3_471 Ti3sh5_f3rgi3_471 Apr 09, 2016
Negative critics helps to enhance our writing right??...I honestly thought this was really boring and played out and you should indicate when your speaking from first person or third person point of view...your book name caught my attention but you first chapter didnt...keep working thou
LillyDover LillyDover Mar 26, 2016
Being a nerd is not a reason it to have friends. Not having anyone in school who share your interests or viewpoint is a valid reason, but having those views alone doesn't immediately mark you as friendless!
Night_Angel45 Night_Angel45 Apr 26, 2016
How can anyone like studying? Tbh I still haven't done  my homework from last September and it's April now.. #badAss
IOnlySpeakSarcasm IOnlySpeakSarcasm May 29, 2016
Do they get a personal flurry like Olaf cuz I'm sure a group called December must be sad in winter