Skater Girl

Skater Girl

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Mel Martini By mel_martini Updated Sep 04

They turn and walk away with their boards a little confused I think, talking amongst themselves. He locks my phone and I grab it off him and stand up and before I can walk away he grabs the sleeve of my jumper...

Jade is your typical average high school student who wants nothing more than to skateboard. Evan is a huge troublemaker and a pro skateboarder with a "bad boy" image and a reputation that would turn anyone away. Except for Jade who finds him super intriguing, and wants nothing more but what he can give to her, a little bit of love and skateboarding. But when a deal made is broken, will it make or break what Evan and Jade have?

Carls101 Carls101 Apr 15
I think it's ok however it's hard to understand it just doesn't flow right
katautumnmelrose katautumnmelrose Dec 30, 2014
Ok, just saying, so far this seems to have some really good potential. But the way it's structured, it's hard understand. It doesn't really make sense when I read it. Do you have a co author or editor or anything?