Perfect You

Perfect You

583 Reads 3 Votes 6 Part Story
LyviaAlvarez By LyviaAlvarez Updated Jan 30, 2012

I took a deep breath and exhailed. As the oxygen left my lungs i felt myself slip... I sliped into a place of imposibilities. A place of action and adventure. Romance, and jealousy. A place so perfect and unreal.....thats it! Its not real.... a place where i fit in finally, im not alowed to live. Im not alowed to live in such a perfect world. A perfect world with the perfect guy....right? Why cant i have this one thing, this one place? 
Dreams are a tricky thing. You dont know that they are fake till you wake up.....

chanina123 chanina123 May 26, 2011
I agree with @TheShadowThief  At first i didnt get it and now i like it please check out my stories i work so hard especially on Love is a Dangerous thing
TheShadowThief TheShadowThief Nov 14, 2010
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                              Wow. At first I was just like. 'Wait wait whats going on here?' but now I see its actually a pretty good chapter. Some advice Im going to offer is probably check your spelling a bit. Like, "his tone made a gentle shill go up my spine.." Like that. Other than that its pretty good.
                              Keep writing!
KAFrak KAFrak Nov 04, 2010
Geeez, this chick is really in like..she's kind of freaked out lol
                              
                              
                              pst, check out one of my stories