Elsa in love with a dangerous but heart racing species......
Nice start! The readers would definitely crave to read the next chapter. And also, you did a good job on leaving Evan's character as the mysterious one. ;)
@regulargirl22 thanks alot
@EKShortstories Really? Thanks
@pipskadi Thank u so much!!
I think this is a good start! I'm not a fan of vampires, but I'm interested in where this will be going >:)
I liked you prologue it was a nice intro to the story and some of the characters.
@Always_Love_Ireland thank a lot
I liked this :) You need to try and run the first sentences a little more smoothly but overall good!