Faithful Heartbeat

Faithful Heartbeat

17 Part Story 4.2K Reads 217 Votes
Trisha By angela98 Updated Sep 21, 2012

Elsa in love with a dangerous but heart racing species......

BluePurp_38 BluePurp_38 May 07, 2013 10:36AM
Nice start! The readers would definitely crave to read the next chapter. And also, you did a good job on leaving Evan's character as the mysterious one. ;)
angela98 angela98 Oct 12, 2012 02:59PM
@regulargirl22 thanks alot
                                    
                                    @EKShortstories Really? Thanks
                                    
                                    @pipskadi Thank u so much!!
EKShortstories EKShortstories Sep 30, 2012 02:17PM
I think this is a good start!  I'm not a fan of vampires, but I'm interested in where this will be going >:)
regulargirl22 regulargirl22 Sep 30, 2012 08:26AM
I liked you prologue it was a nice intro to the story and some of the  characters.
angela98 angela98 Sep 30, 2012 08:17AM
@BrokenWalls thanks
                                    
                                    @NewBornChild ty!
                                    
                                    @Always_Love_Ireland thank a lot
NewBornChild NewBornChild Sep 29, 2012 03:49PM
I liked this :) You need to try and run the first sentences a little more smoothly but overall good!