The Fury of a Storm

The Fury of a Storm

4.6K Reads 133 Votes 15 Part Story
Iris Ó Dubhghaill By Zanintia725 Updated Mar 02, 2011

Seventeen-year-old Storm Challenge is alone in the world. Her mother died just two months ago, leaving her the only one in the world with something special. The power to control the winds, the storms, and the power of thunder and lightning. Storm Challenge takes pity from no one. But what if she could finally find someone that could finally show her what the true meaning of love is?

TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Feb 09, 2011
@Zanintia725 - hehe, never been described as a bouncer before. Perhaps i oughta get Wattpad to change me from an Ambassador to a Bouncer =] 
Zanintia725 Zanintia725 Feb 09, 2011
@TheOrangutan nononono! Thanks for it, I can fix it now. Mistakes are not welcome guests in my writing. They keep gate-crashing, it's good to know I have trustworthy bouncers to remove them. 
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Feb 09, 2011
I enjoyed this, A good start. 
                              Hope you don't mind me pointing out a couple of things. 
                              Prologue is spelt slightly wrong, and perhaps change "shocks" to "strikes" at the end of the third para. 
                              Doesn't detract in any way from an intensely powerful start though. Nicely done, Gav
Arintez Arintez Jan 13, 2011
@Zanintia725 I think you should! I like it so far and now I'm going to continue on eagerly =D
Zanintia725 Zanintia725 Jan 11, 2011
@Arintez Thank you so much! This story is on a little hold, but if you think I should post more I promise to work on it!
Arintez Arintez Jan 10, 2011
So short but so captivating. I love the passion in your writing already.