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Born With Blood

Born With Blood

121K Reads 7.2K Votes 42 Part Story
Grace By DivineReaderz Completed

A serial killer by night and a normal teenager by day. 
Erica's the most successful criminal in the business. She's never missed an assignment, either at school or at work. 
But what happens when she can't kill the most important assignment of her life? 
And why does a secret organization want her blood? 
When the hunter becomes the hunted and dark pasts & secrets are revealed, will Erica be able to protect those she loves?
Or will she let darkness drive her fate once again?
  Highest Rank in Mystery/Thriller: #2

kbaes247 kbaes247 Apr 05
I meam she isn't lying, remember she kills her victims quickly so they don't suffer much! Nice💜
You have a whole lot of incomplete sentences. Either combine some or make them complete somehow
I can so hear buffy saying this. Are you a vampire slayer fan by any chance? 😬
AnniesBooks AnniesBooks Apr 17
I think you should change "I used to be afraid of it once" to either "I was afraid of it once" or "I used to be afraid of it" to make it flow better (:
I take it he is ill? Or has something wrong with him. Sorry for so many comments when I like a book I comment a lot. *Dionis *
Money is retarded I swear. Just the mention of money and person will do anything.