Once Bitten Twice Shy

Once Bitten Twice Shy

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naturalbeauty12345 By naturalbeauty12345 Updated Feb 14, 2012

“Leah!” I hissed as I turned towards her. She backed away from me and into the hallway. I held my ears and glared at her.

“Y-your neck! Your e-e-eyes, your teeth... y-you!” She stuttered making no sense.

“What are you going on about?” I asked her. She took a step forward cautiously. And turned me towards the mirror. I was faced with the reflection of myself… but it wasn’t me. In my reflection I was pale and ivory skinned, my normally green eyes were gold, like seeing a pair of  cat’s eyes in the dark, and my jaw hung open in shock, revealing a set of razor sharp, white little blade-like fangs. If all of this wasn’t enough to confirm my worst nightmares, there on my neck was two red bite marks on my now pale hard flawless skin.

“Oh God.” I said.


Melanie, a.k.a. Mel, Black doesn't like a lot of things. She doesn't like having dead parents. She doesn't like cemeteries on Halloween. She doesn't like her best friends popular twin brother Sebastian. And she most definitely does not like vampires. I guess it's just tough luck all around, huh Melanie?

Incomplete_N_Alone Incomplete_N_Alone Apr 18, 2013
holy cow utters this story is awesome and i just started reading it ur a good writer!!  :-P
Crimson_Princess102 Crimson_Princess102 May 14, 2012
Not every girl in the world :3 Most of my friends aren't. Anyways, great story thus far!
xXpicturethatXx xXpicturethatXx Sep 28, 2011
I've been reading too many werewolf books... if that's possible, i love ur writiting so I hope ur vampire book is just as good!!!!