Innocence: Taken

Innocence: Taken

197 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Summer By SummerAndTripp Updated Sep 28, 2011

In this Short Story, read about your average Joe family on the day of 9/11. Will the family survive, or face a horrible death as the building tumbles too an end?

isabella0405 isabella0405 Oct 22, 2011
It was a really sweet story with really good descriptions I love it especially Olivia !!!!!!!!!! Really good job I hope you get a really good grade!!!!!!
cookieninja1 cookieninja1 Oct 20, 2011
its a really good story!!!!! check the grammar and then its perfect <333
BonnieWitch BonnieWitch Sep 28, 2011
that was really sweet... apart from the plane but you get what i mean everything was beautifully described well done :)
silentxrequiem silentxrequiem Sep 28, 2011
This is reallty good. I couldn't spot too many mistakes and whatnot. It was emotional :D Wow.
rksunshine rksunshine Sep 28, 2011
woww, this is pretty good
                              be care ful about some of the grammar mistakes
                              but i was interestedd .. voted. x
SummerAndTripp SummerAndTripp Sep 28, 2011
@JustCeline Thanks! I've been thinking of a few ways too add more detail ^^