Perfect Abduction

Perfect Abduction

5.6K Reads 152 Votes 5 Part Story
Tracey By usafchild Completed

Yvonne wants everything perfect. Unfortunatly, her boyfriend can't give that to her due to the little flaws he pocessess. After a big fight, Yvonne leaves their home just to be abducted by Aliens! Soundes like a nightmare? Well, the adventure that Yvonne goes through seems everthing but.

  • abduction
  • alien
  • fight
  • perfect
fabulousrandom fabulousrandom May 28, 2017
Hey I'm pretty new to Wattpad. I just love your story. I would love to have some tips from you--I'm only thirteen. I have a book that needs publishing. It sounds totally unprofessional though. Please help me!! You seem like you have the same style of writing
notor_ius_ notor_ius_ Jun 09
Usually with text such as this, you’d usually italicize the text. Basically meaning, this would be something she would think in her head, so it would either have “ or ‘, around it if not italicized.
notor_ius_ notor_ius_ Jun 09
“The spaghetti is overdone!” or “The spaghetti is overdone,”*
notor_ius_ notor_ius_ Jun 09
More than one exclamation or question mark usually is grammatically incorrect. A proper term would be a question mark, since she’s asking a question.
Miss_Kalene Miss_Kalene Oct 01
Interesting story. The fall out was good too. I want to read more
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