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His Daughter

His Daughter

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Chicago P.D. By Chicago_PD_ Updated May 12, 2016

Rylee Rollin grew up with her mother. Catherine Rollin. She never had a father to look up to or to ask for help. Only her and her mom. Rylee is on the Varsity Soccer Team. During one of her games trouble shows up and her mother is no where in sight. With danger coming after Rylee she has no one. So she calls her mom's friend because he works at Hawaii Five-O. Her mother told her to only call him when she is in danger. The one and only Steve McGarrett. Isn't it the perfect time to use it?

lisavevo lisavevo Sep 10, 2016
If you want to improve your writing, try not to start nearly every sentence with "I" :)