A collection of poems/short stories which I have written. I hope you enjoy!
That was very well written. It tells a wonderful story, and you have a wonderful grasp of poetry. Well done. :D
Genius! Simply frickin genius. Two different outcomes. I love it!
I'm not very experienced with poems, but I found this one well written. I love all the different emotions, and I'm sure many people can relate to the poem, in both ways. Nice work.
Well written :D
Tells two alternative stories
I like it :)
Amazing Poem, you have loads of talent, not to mention how cool the read up and down *clicks vote button*
THIS. IS. AMAZING.
I read it, and I'm like...okay, that was nice.
Then I read @WhyteRhose 's comment, and went on to read it backwards.
YOU ARE A GENIUS. Keep writing!