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Reach ➡ Kylo Ren

Reach ➡ Kylo Ren

23.2K Reads 887 Votes 21 Part Story
🌠🌠🌠 By skywvlker Completed

(Book 1) 

"...ever since I've known you I have always felt I belong with you."
 The republic has fallen and the First Order has risen. My Jedi training is on the blink of completion but with my master wanted from around the galaxy we had to go into hiding. The other member of our obscure Jedi group, Ben is also with us. But I never knew what would happen next...
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- - Jul 03, 2016
This is very intriguing. The only things I noticed were you used wonder (Ex: I wondered about the room) instead of wander (Ex: I wander what he's up to.) And then the tense changed back and forth from past to present. But other than that, great job! Definitely makes me want to read more!