My Love and Savior

My Love and Savior

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Ashlee Therese By AshleeTherese Updated Mar 12, 2014

I hate you dumb ugly ass. I could feel the venom in my mother’s voice. Danyelle is the outcast of her family. After the death of her wonderful grandmother she is forced to move back in with her wicked crack head mother. Jack is a normal teenage boy who has everything going for him. When Danyelle and Jacks paths cross, Jack falls in love immediately. Follow Danyelle and Jack as they deal with life’s battles. This is some what of a true story

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tyriker tyriker Jan 15, 2013
ok thanks you sound like a very good person and i felt like i had the need to say sorry buyt ok :)
AshleeTherese AshleeTherese Jan 14, 2013
@tyriker no you didnt hurt my feelings i take critism well and no need to say sorry
Sceritz Sceritz Nov 19, 2012
Hey careful with your spacing, it's crazy long, but good start regardless, I enjoy it.  Watch some things for realism sake, like the age of being in high school and all?  Careful with that.
lolipopmix lolipopmix Sep 10, 2012
@AshleeTherese lol.. it's all over. Here in Detroit.. whew wee honey
lolipopmix lolipopmix Sep 10, 2012
@AshleeTherese Oh these kids are way advanced for me.. lol.. and it's cool
AshleeTherese AshleeTherese Sep 10, 2012
@lolipopmix so sorry that im so late getting back to you yes she is grown for her age and jack is 12 in this chapter