Hiccup x reader

Hiccup x reader

22K Reads 742 Votes 10 Part Story
Fangirlingbrony By fangirlingbrony Updated Jan 23, 2017

This takes place during the first movie and astrid is gender bent into ash. Read to find out more. Also first fanfic please be reasonable.

ON HIATUS

  • comedy
  • fanfiction
  • fantasy
  • httyd
  • reader
  • romance
SmolSneks1 SmolSneks1 Apr 04, 2017
Great story but you really do need some punctuation. I'm not hating or anything though.
Ellawrenb Ellawrenb 3 days ago
I'm not trying to be rude but a writing tip that you could benefit from is show don't tell you want to be able to give your readers a picture in their mind
Seven centuries old and yet all the buildings are new. I'm pretty sure is how it went. (Sorry I just love the movie)
Naruto0me Naruto0me Mar 21, 2017
Can you please add some common punctuation? AKA  '. ? !' I really like this story just please add some punctuation.
FrostyMew FrostyMew May 31, 2017
Poor Hicc and cool we got Astrid as a male and also love the writing i feel like I'm in the movie
Aphmau_fan-girl Aphmau_fan-girl Oct 13, 2016
After this it's : but it's not the worst ) this part you  missed out