Forever Changed

Forever Changed

511 Reads 21 Votes 6 Part Story
Haboon Osmond By BerryFun411 Updated Jan 15, 2012

During medieval times Victoria thought she was alive to just... pretty much live. But when she meets the king and queen of England and Damon, things will start to change dramatically.

BerryFun411 BerryFun411 Jan 26, 2012
@HelenEmrys mine is on october the 27th, and happy late birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BerryFun411 BerryFun411 Jan 24, 2012
@QwertySaah Thank you so much! BTW that pretty girl's name is Blake Lively, she is from the show gossip Girl! :D thxs for the feedback, btw have you read rising sun?
QwertySaah QwertySaah Jan 22, 2012
You write very well for a thirteen year old. There are still things that you could work to improve, but I am slightly impressed. 
                              Also, you're cover is beautiful. It has that really pretty girl from that television show... :)
                              Anyway, the first chapter was acceptable.
HelenCorbin HelenCorbin Jan 15, 2012
@BerryFun411 I do hope that you will enjoy my story. Please let me know your views when you have read my story. Thankyou for replying to my message and thankyou for fanning me. I hope you will add my work to your reading list?. When is your birthday?. Mine is january the 16th which is tomorrow.
BerryFun411 BerryFun411 Jan 15, 2012
@HelenEmrys Thank you so much, and i will enjoy your story! :)
HelenCorbin HelenCorbin Jan 15, 2012
@BerryFun411 I Have fanned you and I have added both of your stories into my story. I hope your enjoying my story The Wedding.