I'm not sure what this poem is actually about, it's kinda morbid, but I hope you like it anyway, and if you don't that's cool too.
@River456986 Thanks! Yeah I wrote this awhile ago, it was really confusing and it was supposed to be :) But thanks a lot I'm glad you liked it:)
It is quite confusing but in all it is a very well beautifully written poem. my tip for you is to put it into a few stanzas to make it a tad easier to read but other then that I love that you really put a lot of emotion into your work Great Job. :)