John the Ripper

John the Ripper

4 Part Story 1.4K Reads 30 Votes
Lizzie/Natalie By GothBird659 Updated Feb 10, 2013

Autumn Summers was an ordinary fourteen year-old high school girl with an obsession with Jack the Ripper. She wasn't the most popular person at Hilltop, but she didn't really care. Overall, her life was pretty normal until a fateful day that would haunt her dreams for many years to come. 
    
    Trapped in school with a copycat murderer, everything was about to change. Can she find out who the killer is, before she and everyone in the group of fifteen pupils are killed?

I have the book
                                    The mammoth book of Jack the ripper 
                                    It's really interesting and it gives you different theories of Jack the ripper
arcticfringe arcticfringe Apr 27, 2012 06:37PM
Really good start! I saw no mistakes! and the cover is awesome!
KellyKohler KellyKohler Apr 27, 2012 06:10PM
Very intriguing...makes the reader want to continue...the detail was good, but I could see you writing more detail to capture the audience even more then you did. Great story so far :) xo
GothGirl69 GothGirl69 Mar 24, 2012 06:18PM
@jcisneros12 @cjmac2029 @Tiffany1996 @MissAuthor2B @LittleMissKeeper 
                                    
                                    Thanks for the comments guys :-) We're planning to continue the story after Easter so don't worry!
MissAuthor2B MissAuthor2B Mar 18, 2012 06:07PM
I wanna read it!!! Studied Jack The Ripper last year in history so I wanna see what happens next in your story =D x
Tiffany1996 Tiffany1996 Mar 15, 2012 11:25AM
The starts good but need to update : GIVE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE