John the Ripper

4 Part Story 1.4K Reads 29 Votes
Lizzie/Natalie By GothBird659 Updated 3 years ago
Autumn Summers was an ordinary fourteen year-old high school girl with an obsession with Jack the Ripper. She wasn't the most popular person at Hilltop, but she didn't really care. Overall, her life was pretty normal until a fateful day that would haunt her dreams for many years to come. 
    
    Trapped in school with a copycat murderer, everything was about to change. Can she find out who the killer is, before she and everyone in the group of fifteen pupils are killed?
This is an interesting beginning! And yay story telling time. You left me with a cliffhanger, and I want to read more. You are a pretty good writer, could have a bit more description as to what the house looks like, and maybe a bit more indication on the emotions of the Emma. Even though it's a prologue, it's important to allow the reader to experience a connection with Emma, and I have received none. :) But otherwise, you've earned my vote!
This is an interesting beginning! And yay story telling time. You left me with a cliffhanger, and I want to read more. You are a pretty good writer, could have a bit more description as to what the house looks like, and maybe a bit more indication on the emotions of the Emma. Even though it's a prologue, it's important to allow the reader to experience a connection with Emma, and I have received none. :) But otherwise, you've earned my vote!
This is an interesting beginning! And yay story telling time. You left me with a cliffhanger, and I want to read more. You are a pretty good writer, could have a bit more description as to what the house looks like, and maybe a bit more indication on the emotions of the Emma. Even though it's a prologue, it's important to allow the reader to experience a connection with Emma, and I have received none. :) But otherwise, you've earned my vote!
This is an interesting beginning! And yay story telling time. You left me with a cliffhanger, and I want to read more. You are a pretty good writer, could have a bit more description as to what the house looks like, and maybe a bit more indication on the emotions of the Emma. Even though it's a prologue, it's important to allow the reader to experience a connection with Emma, and I have received none. :) But otherwise, you've earned my vote!
This is an interesting beginning! And yay story telling time. You left me with a cliffhanger, and I want to read more. You are a pretty good writer, could have a bit more description as to what the house looks like, and maybe a bit more indication on the emotions of the Emma. Even though it's a prologue, it's important to allow the reader to experience a connection with Emma, and I have received none. :) But otherwise, you've earned my vote!
This is an interesting beginning! And yay story telling time. You left me with a cliffhanger, and I want to read more. You are a pretty good writer, could have a bit more description as to what the house looks like, and maybe a bit more indication on the emotions of the Emma. Even though it's a prologue, it's important to allow the reader to experience a connection with Emma, and I have received none. :) But otherwise, you've earned my vote!