Started as friends and end up lovers will drama occur and will they stay together thru everything stay tuned
Dayum, where is the punctuation marks & capital letters 2 start off sentences & shii??
How this bihh pregnant?! It's his 1st dayum day at the skool
I like the story line the book could use some work I well see holre it ends
it's starting off good we well see just how good your weighting skills are
Not To Be Rude Or Anything Because I Am Liking The Story But This Is Hard To Comprehend Because There Are Some Run On Sentences. I Would Like If You Could Proof Read Please and Thanks.
I Love The Story Line. But The Book Could Use more Work. The Nanes Should Be Capital And When Sone One Is Talking Use Quotation Marks. For Example: ( "The Book Could Use Some Work" Paula Said To The Author )