C-BUSTERS

C-BUSTERS

291 Reads 18 Votes 6 Part Story
Stephen O-Mensah By Mensah88 Updated Jun 01, 2013

Edmund, Stephen, Nsowah and Klinsman are Paranoblins(creature who view their paranormal abilities as ART)

  • blind
  • cleaning
  • commander
  • creature
  • creatures
  • dormitary
  • edmund
  • era
  • exile
  • family
  • farmer
  • girl
  • immunity
  • implement
  • mutation
  • night
  • power
  • prejudice
  • principal
  • prophecy
  • troops
  • villainity
  • weak
theducksurfer theducksurfer Apr 24, 2012
i really like this story.....dorin sounds like an interesting character!!!
                              it's original too which makes it all the better!!!
k8ybug k8ybug Apr 21, 2012
Paranoblins.. great overall idea!!!!!!! this was so well thought out. i like the perspective you write it
RichardStaschy RichardStaschy Mar 09, 2012
wow... This is a really good chapter. I do feel sorry for Dorin, not because he murdered but he seemed to be tainted from the early start. 
                              
                              I do think the discription is very cool and the backgroud story is very interesting... :)
whikerms whikerms Feb 27, 2012
This seems a bit rushed... and you might think about formatting it a bit better (spaces in between paragraphs?). Interesting idea, though.