The Alphas Baby (undergoing major editing)

The Alphas Baby (undergoing major editing)

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jawslean By jawslean Completed

Penelope Rivera is a nice quiet girl who has respect for everyone and everything but what happens when she finds her mate and new alpha River Vermont who  is engaged to Jennifer his lovely high school sweet heart.So river rejects Penelope on her birthday  and on Penelope's birthday she ends up pregnant and he rejects her and he never knew she was pregnant until his beta, Marcus informs him and months later she comes back and he starts to develop feelings for her what will happen then and what happens when Penelope has a dark past she didn't even know she had?

  • betrayed
  • death
  • demons
  • drama
  • fighting
  • forbiddenlove
  • love
  • mysterious
  • pregnancy
  • revenge
  • secrets
  • vampires
  • war
  • werewolf
soullessliving soullessliving 2 days ago
Needs some grammar work and shorter sentences! Little bit of mouthful :)
pikachu2712 pikachu2712 Nov 09, 2017
In my country, Javanese people called their brother 'Mas' 😂😂
uniqueangel2331 uniqueangel2331 Jun 25, 2017
This is one hell of an outfit..... Almost all complementary colours included😫😫
soullessliving soullessliving 2 days ago
From our dad, not my. Single out he’s only hers not theirs
DoubtingEverything DoubtingEverything May 06, 2017
Omg I'm sorry, but commas! I know you probably improved over time. Call me petty, but I literally can't help but correct this. I'm sorry 😊
me_mna me_mna Jul 27, 2017
If this is edited then you need to add commas and periods.  That's a REALLY long sentence.