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The Alphas Baby (undergoing major editing)

The Alphas Baby (undergoing major editing)

940K Reads 21.1K Votes 23 Part Story
jawslean By jawslean Completed

Penelope Rivera is a nice quiet girl who has respect for everyone and everything but what happens when she finds her mate and new alpha River Vermont who  is engaged to Jennifer his lovely high school sweet heart.So river rejects Penelope on her birthday  and on Penelope's birthday she ends up pregnant and he rejects her and he never knew she was pregnant until his beta, Marcus informs him and months later she comes back and he starts to develop feelings for her what will happen then and what happens when Penelope has a dark past she didn't even know she had?

Omg I'm sorry, but commas! I know you probably improved over time. Call me petty, but I literally can't help but correct this. I'm sorry 😊
XImaBossAssBitchX XImaBossAssBitchX Oct 09, 2016
When you said that this chapter was edited, you've done a bad job on doing it.
Just_A_random_Nerd Just_A_random_Nerd Aug 02, 2016
                              If you know where the name comes from your awesome to me
blueazulballs blueazulballs Aug 27, 2016
Cry me a river. No seriously cry a whole new version of River.
Keeeeg Keeeeg May 03, 2016
" I opened it to see a beautiful diamond bracelet that had belonged to my grandmother
ShaeJinn ShaeJinn May 11, 2016
Hi. Sorry to be a bit of a grammar nazi, but you need to watch out for the run-on sentences. That sometimes makes it a bit confusing for the reader.