Forgotten Monsters

Forgotten Monsters

152K Reads 3.1K Votes 45 Part Story
Rachel By Stand_in_the_rain Completed

Best Ranking: #9 in Mystery/Thriller

Resa is doomed. 
The knowledge followed her in the whispers of the other children and the anxious glances from their parents. She knew from the solemn way her mother hung an amulet around her neck on her fifth birthday, not an amulet to ward off evil, but to keep it in. 
So when the cruel queen's right hand, the murderous Prince Cain, takes a peculiar interest in her, she attributes it to her curse. But Cain is cursed in his own way. The queen has kept him prisoner in his tower for seven years, and he's willing to break free any way possible. Soon, joined by a crazy inmate and an increasingly alluring soldier, Resa embarks on a journey where she just may be the hero she's always been told she could never be. 
But even if she broke Cain's curse, would she ever be able to save herself?

  • action
  • adventure
  • fantasy
  • witch
SeriousCereal SeriousCereal Jul 26, 2013
Ah! That little skank! It seems like a pretty good story so far. Awesomeness!!
BellaMilano BellaMilano Jan 27, 2013
Wonderful! So beautiful, this would be an amazing novel if published and an amazing movie that I would go and see!
natsuriayuko natsuriayuko Jan 05, 2013
Dear spirits!
                              
                              This is fantastic. I was cursing in front of my laptop as soon as she took his heart. I was like, "No, no, no, no!" It's like watching Hunter's death in Once Upon A Time, and I hated it, hated the Queen for it.
                              
                              Time to move on to the next chapter.
Stand_in_the_rain Stand_in_the_rain Sep 21, 2012
@DeannaThomson Thanks! Someone actually made my cover for me, she's awesome!
Marjac Marjac Sep 07, 2012
Whoa, I was was quite shocked when the Queen took his heart out of his just but this is a fantasy afterall!
Rayvin Rayvin Jul 13, 2012
A very interesting prologue. Your descriptions were charming along with your dialogue that flowed quite nice. I saw some minor mistakes like a missing period at "pulsing red light He reached up" although that seemed to be it.