The Broken World (Manifesto)

The Broken World (Manifesto)

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AnAbundanceofAwkward By AnAbundanceofAwkward Completed

We live in a broken world filled with broken people. For the "Create your own Manifesto"  contest.

  • manifesto
  • manifestopoem
  • poem
writer97 writer97 Nov 21, 2012
Powerful words, I love it!
                              The last line really creates a twist of humor in the poem it the rest raises a serious issue in our society. The only thing I would advise would be to make it longer so it sticks in a readers head more. :D
ming_ning ming_ning Aug 19, 2012
This is really good and would work well as a song and poem. Bravo!
AnAbundanceofAwkward AnAbundanceofAwkward Sep 30, 2011
@justgrace Well, you should write about something you really care about, but that's basically the definition of a manifesto. Other than that, don't try to hard to rhyme. you should realize I'm only 14 so I'm not the best person to be giving advice :p
hobbity0923 hobbity0923 Sep 28, 2011
And I think to myself "We're so screwed." 
                              That last part made me smile :)
                              I am really horrible at poetry, but for this contest (and for my homeschooling education) I'd like to write a manifesto. Any tips?
AcydHeart AcydHeart Sep 28, 2011
I really, really love yours. It makes me laugh and cry and think.