In which a 17-teen year old hot girl fell in love with a ghost guy from nowhere.
[Cover credits to me]
»100% fiction and 100.99% my imagination«
Amazing first chapter! I love the cover of your book and the title immediately made me interested in reading it.
The description is so well written! Though I felt as if Roy is going to be a ghost? Is it true?
The plots os interesting... Great idea! 😘
Wow! Wow! A breakup in the first chapter, awesome!
I felt how Carla was feeling, so you have excellent writing skills.
And I feel so sad for the poor girl.
And the end was like a cliffhanger! You left me hanging for more, I hope it isn't Roy she crashed into.😉
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Wait, first he didn't wait for her and then this. Like who does he think he is. He's is such a.... Butthole, you deserve better sweetie.
Great writing skills and a solid first chapter!
P.s Josh is a male genitalia