Vanished ✔

Vanished ✔

10.2K Reads 1.1K Votes 30 Part Story
랔 By hipsteray Completed

I'm sorry, Carla, I'm desperate. I'm really sorry. My honor will always be with you. 

My hand slipped down her shirt in a blink, and a drop of tears flowed to my cheek when I pressed against her breast. She gasped in a long breath but I could feel the pain vanished from my soul. 

I'm really sorry, dear. 


Note: this book contains many grammatical errors and has not been edited so read at your own risk :)

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  • badboy
  • badgirl
  • drama
  • family
  • friendship
  • ghost
  • highschool
  • humor
  • killer
  • lgbt
  • love
  • mystery
  • relationship
  • romance
  • sad
  • shortstory
  • spiritual
  • teenfiction
bookwormSarah bookwormSarah Jun 12, 2017
Wow. This is really good. I'll try to finish this when I get the chance
bookwormSarah bookwormSarah Jun 12, 2017
This sounds really interesting, so yes, even though you already have.
victoria_barnes victoria_barnes Jul 16, 2016
Amazing first chapter! I love the cover of your book and the title immediately made me interested in reading it.
themissperfect themissperfect May 25, 2016
The description is so well written! Though I felt as if Roy is going to be a ghost? Is it true?
                              The plots os interesting...  Great idea! 😘
themissperfect themissperfect May 25, 2016
Wow! Wow! A breakup in the first chapter, awesome!
                              I felt how Carla was feeling, so you have excellent writing skills.
                              And I feel so sad for the poor girl.
                              And the end was like a cliffhanger!  You left me hanging for more, I hope it isn't Roy she crashed into.😉
Strawberry_10101 Strawberry_10101 Jun 16, 2016
Hey sorry to be annoying but can you please check out my story I know I know I hate it when people do this too