A Hundred Tears In The Sunset

A Hundred Tears In The Sunset

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J By octoberiswild Completed

--"What's wrong princess? Should I bow down before you? Perhaps bless the very hay you step upon?" Brooke grinned,--


Tehya has lost everything. Her home, her family and even the horses she once cherished. Taken to live in her Uncle's castle she spends her days gazing from her giant attic window wishing for her numb feelings to end. Then whilst trying to escape the many guards which protect her Tehya stumbles apon Mr Heathdale...the stable man who under his dirty clothes and muddy face is a handsome man who brings a lightness to her heart that no other man ever had...

  • fantasy
  • fiction
jcompton jcompton Feb 05, 2014
I like your introduction. Very dramatic, and it shows her stubborn personality right away! Love it!
ZVivlia ZVivlia Nov 24, 2013
While the story is lovely..the quotes before the chapter add a whole different charm to it...lovely verses...<3
EvangelineM EvangelineM Jun 27, 2012
Ive had this on my reading list for a long time and finally got around to reading it. Just this much and im already hooked! :)
RoseKimberly RoseKimberly Feb 19, 2012
I have been reading your story today its wonderful. There are some editing errs but overall a fantastic start to a very promising book or even a series. Great work, keep at it!
Samanthacfraticelli Samanthacfraticelli Feb 12, 2012
Wow i am really impressed the title is just so catchy you did great! :)
Snowdrop07 Snowdrop07 Jan 25, 2012
A nice, well-written prologue. I feel intrigued as to what happened to her parents and who the guy is. Tehya seems both strong-minded and stubborn - which I like in a main female character. Good job so far! :D