Tainted Love

Tainted Love

11.7K Reads 235 Votes 22 Part Story
StarCrossed81 By StarCrossed81 Completed

Alaina was a preppy girl who stayed on her side of the tracks, that is untill she was dragged to a party on the other side of town. After somehow finding herself in the middle of a fight she had no part of she met Tre, her savior. He was like no one she had ever met and she soon found herself in way too deep. It wasn't untill later he admitted to her he had a girlfriend. Alaina was heartbroken she wasnt into being the other girl but the more she tries to stay away from Tre the more she wants him. Will she give in and be the girl on the side, give Tre a ultimatum, or find the strength  to up and walk away.

impy1901 impy1901 Oct 04
Hi it's a good story and all but the way you have set up your speech makes it confusing and hard to follow. Usually you make a new line when a new character speaks otherwise it can confusing for the reader. It's up to you ultimately. Thank for your hard work writing this
StarCrossed81 StarCrossed81 May 28, 2013
K this story has been running around in my head so I decided to post it. Comment and let me know if you like it or not!