Last Cloudless Night EDITING (April NaNoWriMo)

Last Cloudless Night EDITING (April NaNoWriMo)

31.3K Reads 806 Votes 8 Part Story
Desirae Clark By yabookprincess Updated 4 days ago

The world you know is ending.

But you have a choice. Choose the strongest of your species and protect them - make them the ones to survive the apocalypse. Or? Die.

But not everybody has a choice. 

I didn't have a choice when they ripped me away from my family. 
I didn't have a choice when they locked me away with strangers. 
And I certainly did not have a choice when I saw the future flash right before my eyes.

But I did have a choice in how to shape it.

So here's my story.

frostfires frostfires Mar 16
I can't believe I haven't read this already? <3
                              
                              You got me hooked in the very first chapter. And your writing style is A++ <3
This is so mysterious! I'm not sure about how much I loved reading this considering how much I love you. Babe, this is amazing. I'm so glad that you decided to write this. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next cause girl, you have me hooked.
Gahhh I finally got round to reading this and oooohhhh mmmmyyy GOOOODDDDDD!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH GAH
Sceritz Sceritz 5 days ago
So is it bad if I'm actually freezing? LOL kidding, but you've done well with descriptions and setting this books tone, I feel that the situation you've set up here will lead to some good story conflict that will develop into something interesting :D Well done.
Omggg I love how it ready starts off. I really like it and this is only my first chapter haha. I could tell that you took your time writing this, am I right? It's so well worded and oh goooshhh I love it
Sceritz Sceritz 5 days ago
So is it bad if I'm actually freezing? LOL kidding, but you've done well with descriptions and setting this books tone, I feel that the situation you've set up here will lead to some good story conflict that will develop into something interesting :D Well done.