Neverending Story [ ON HOLD ]

Neverending Story [ ON HOLD ]

272 Reads 4 Votes 5 Part Story
gelalaay By gelalaay Updated Sep 28, 2011

What if your prince charming turned out to be just one of the boys? And Love never turned out what you expected it to be. This is the story of Angela Desiree. a 17 year old girl. Who fell in love with the wrong prince charming.

  • angela
  • away
  • boy
  • chase
  • cinderella
  • desiree
  • fiction
  • funny
  • girl
  • hate
  • heart
  • highschool
  • humor
  • love
  • michael
  • music
  • nathan
  • neverending
  • neverenging
  • prince
  • princess
  • school
  • shane
  • spirited
  • story
gelalaay gelalaay Sep 30, 2011
@sleepyheadedpig Ahh. Thank You .^___^ I'll try to improve. :D
sleepyheadedpig sleepyheadedpig Sep 30, 2011
@gelalaay Ayos lang yan! Just keep on writing and you'll improve. Try mo rin magbasa ng mga ibang stories para may knowledge ka sa iba't ibang writing styles and techniques. :) Anubeeh, ganyan din ang mga characters ko. Haha!
gelalaay gelalaay Sep 30, 2011
Yun nga.. Yung thoughts. Feel ko tuloy may split personality ang mga characters ko. Huhuhu. @sleepyheadedpig
sleepyheadedpig sleepyheadedpig Sep 30, 2011
@gelalaay Hindi naman! Though medyo magulo lang yung thoughts ng characters... not that I'm an expert or anything. Pero maganda yung story! :)
gelalaay gelalaay Sep 30, 2011
@sleepyheadedpig Thanks ^___^ Im really having a hard time keeping up with the story. Feel ko pasikot sikot yung mga sinusulat ko. :'(
sleepyheadedpig sleepyheadedpig Sep 28, 2011
I like your prologue. Plus the quote by Erich Fromm... Intriguing! Haha! Babasahin ko ito . ;)