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Blood Moon

Blood Moon

105K Reads 2.4K Votes 30 Part Story
yme123 By yme123 Completed

Living in a community already run by conforming zealots Ariel and Leira must hide what they truly are from the rest of their world. But when a new mass hysteria and fear brakes through their all ready intense world a cry for persecution and extermination is heard. 
 Ariel and Leira must find a way to escape with their friends before they are caught up in the fever sweeping their planet.

  • action
  • aliens
  • angry
  • ariel
  • black
  • dark
  • dedications
  • fantasy
  • fear
  • fiction
  • freedom
  • hate
  • help
  • judgement
  • judgment
  • love
  • mindreaders
  • mob
  • moon
  • mystery
  • other
  • planet
  • powers
  • prejudice
  • revenge
  • romance
  • saving
  • science
  • space
  • supernatural
  • survival
  • trail
  • trial
  • twins
  • watty
  • worlds
StayBeautiful StayBeautiful Jan 19, 2012
A few grammar mistakes (not that I can judge, I'm the worst :/) like permafrost mentioned but apart from that everything is great! <3 *voted*
permafrost permafrost Jan 18, 2012
The last word... 'and so is her's' is supposed to be 'and so is hers'. (:
                              You describe really well, and it is able to paint vivid pictures in my mind. (: Gave me the creeps... And that's great because... that's what this story is about right? :D
AnotherHonestMistake AnotherHonestMistake Jan 18, 2012
oh my gosh you have really good details! i love the cast by the way!
LovelyLivvi LovelyLivvi Jan 18, 2012
Wonderful use of vocabulary, well written with an original plot. I'm hooked :)) I really hope you do well in the Watty Awards <3 You deserve the best :D
CrazyBookGirl CrazyBookGirl Jan 15, 2012
Just a few grammar mistakes, and the first two paragraphs don't quite flow; but otherwise this looks to be an exceptional read! I'm already hooked,so I voted for you in the Watty Awards. Thank you for sharing this story; I can tell it's going to be a good one. :)
telephonic telephonic Jan 13, 2012
This looks like a really interesting story. I will have to read more soon. The flow is excellent as is the tone.