Insanity and the bunny

Insanity and the bunny

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corrupted865 By corrupted865 Updated Jul 13, 2017

Sam has been noticing something strange his friends grian and taurtus  has been walking ahead of him and been ditching him repeatedly to hang out with the other students and now his fur is turning black while his eyes are changing from blue to red what he doesn't know is that his sanity is crumbling and if his friends are too late a new sam will come out a InSaNe SaM

  • fanfiction
  • samgladiator
  • yanderehigh
I would suggest no run-on sentences and more sensory words.. :3
BatMaid BatMaid Oct 03, 2017
Is it ok if you put " in front and in the end of what everyone is saying? GREAT STORY IM SORRY IF THAT SOUND RUDE!!!!!!!
TheFluffyZebra TheFluffyZebra May 29, 2016
This sounds like it was written by a child for a creative writing project
KGArts KGArts May 09, 2016
God story. Just try to use perioids and ""marks for talking.