Dreamers Never Be Damned

Dreamers Never Be Damned

1.1K Reads 57 Votes 1 Part Story
Christina Wynnwood By diehardwriter21 Completed

By no means was it like this all the time, but it had seemed that the neurotic-ness that the party stirred up in me, pushed us apart. The same guilty blush crept to my cheeks again and I dropped my cleaning supplies on the plush carpet. Then I approached him, wary. Would he accept my apology or was our relationship really in trouble?

  • apology
  • closer
  • dating
  • dream
  • growing
  • interracial
  • love
  • reality
  • short
  • sorry
  • story
JocelynR126 JocelynR126 Nov 17, 2011
It was truely incredible! I don't really know how to make it better... It had very fluid and I just kept guessing what this might be about. It was something I really enjoyed reading and I would love to read it again! *votes*
emilazy emilazy Nov 15, 2011
this is great!!! i love your writing style its so... aloof? no, bad word... aha either way its different from any other stylre i've read! You're vcabulary is amazing too, and it's nice not hearing the same words over and over again. wish this was a whole story!!!!!
AemiJules AemiJules Nov 14, 2011
I've read this before, but I think it's great, because it's an accurate portrayal  of what really goes on in a relationship, including the disagreements between a couple. I wish it wasn't just 3 pages but a whole book!
elohcian elohcian Nov 14, 2011
I absolutely adore this, I couldn't find anything wrong with it. Probably because I was glued to the plot and characters. You are an amazing writer and you described a beautiful love story in three pages, and made my heart melt at the same time. VERY GOOD WORK.
EllieTyler562 EllieTyler562 Nov 11, 2011
:D I really loved how you have described everything :D Great story!!
timelxrdart timelxrdart Nov 11, 2011
That was great! It flowed perfectly and you described things extremely well. Are you planning on making this into a full out chapter-by-chapter story? Or was it just going to be this marvelous little piece here?