I don't see Orochimaru as purely evil. Only someone who is trying to reach a goal. I wanted to capture his real personality because i feel more people should know. A reader X Orochimaru. I hope you enjoy.
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I like the plot. The only issues are the typos and grammar. Konoha was misspelled as kohana and whenever a new person speaks it needs a new paragraph.