So over you(song by me)

So over you(song by me)

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asramubn By asramubn Updated Sep 26, 2011

I wrote it after i found my bf cheat on me again...i was going through break-up phase n listen to alot to taylor swift,avril & other sad songs & one night lying on bed thinking about my Ex this lines came into my brain n i wrote it.
Its my first time so excuse me if it not rhyming & thanks for reading..
Love ya' :)

  • cheated
  • hurt
  • lie
  • life
  • love
  • road
fuzzypenguin fuzzypenguin Sep 26, 2011
@asramubn Don\'t know, really. Most of the stories I\'m currently reading aren\'t finished as of yet...
fuzzypenguin fuzzypenguin Sep 26, 2011
Short and sweet... Can't say much more because I don't really write or read poetry, so I don't know what makes up a good poem :P My only suggestion would be to not replace the spelling of real words, such as why. It makes the writing look immature. Also, your spacing is a bit off...