On the Run: A Love Story [On Hold]

On the Run: A Love Story [On Hold]

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Christopher By PLUR4Life Updated Nov 03, 2011

David has been forced to move in with his father who he just met after losing his mother. He is determined to live the rest of his high school years as invisible as he possibly can, but finds it hard to suppress his party going personality. Things begin to change when he meets a girl named Jessica (Jess) that he can't get out of his mind. As they get closer they realize that they share a few things in common. One of them being that they hate their fathers, but for different reasons. Their plan is to run away together, but what happens when two people journey for miles together with only each other to stay alive? How will their relationship develop as the fall in love with each other?

  • abstract
  • christie
  • david
  • death
  • fiction
  • jace
  • jess
  • love
  • megan
  • moving
  • party
  • runaway
  • taylor
  • teen
  • yummypeanutbutter
PLUR4Life PLUR4Life Oct 31, 2011
As far as the grieving, I was planning on adding it a little further in. The character David tends to go off on tangents that express deeper thoughts.
                              
                              Thanks for reading I think yours was pretty good and has potential.
26antara 26antara Sep 26, 2011
i came across this randomly, but i think it has potential! although the prologue was a bit short, it kept you wanting for more. i hope you update soon :)