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Stealing The Bad Boy's Heart

Stealing The Bad Boy's Heart

1.1K Reads 21 Votes 4 Part Story
Marie By XXuniquewriterXX Updated Nov 06, 2011

When you don't know what love is...
When all you've known is it's you againt the world...
When you've fought just to survive...
How do you react when everything changes?

For Audrey Natick, this is what happens. Her mother over doses and now she has to go live with a father she's never known half way across the country. She doesn't have a clue of what to expect, especially when she meets the badboy, Jake Dark. Her whole world just got complicated...

  • anger
  • bad
  • best
  • boy
  • brother
  • cautious
  • change
  • cold
  • confusing
  • crying
  • determined
  • father
  • fighting
  • friend
  • hate
  • home
  • hurt
  • intriguing
  • leaving
  • love
  • mom
  • new
  • peaceful
  • sleeping
  • step
  • trouble
  • world
MayEsdot MayEsdot Oct 12, 2011
I feel that this was a really good hook at the beginning of the story.  There was a few errors, but not much.  It wasn't quite clear to me though if her father was actually dead to her (she thought he was dead) or dead metaphorically (disappeared). voted.