A Cruel Fate

A Cruel Fate

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Kai By Feathered Completed

The cruel world is full of abandoned children, but they in the end, they will be happy.

  • alone
  • children
  • dying
  • life
  • manifestopoem
Feathered Feathered Oct 01, 2011
@ArtemiSoul I know, though we have much more than that too, it's like some of them exchanged everything to us...
ArtemiSoul ArtemiSoul Oct 01, 2011
We're all so lucky to have food, water, shelter! This poem really puts things into perspective.
Feathered Feathered Sep 28, 2011
@helaofvenice Thanks. And thats what I'm trying to say, I'm trying to get the message across, you know? At least give them a grin, trust me, whenever I pass someone I give them a grin and it's like the whole atmosphere changed. The mood was lightened :)
batcrypt batcrypt Sep 27, 2011
whoa, i like this it's so full of meaning, i can understand wat ur trying to say. oh and i completly get what you mean by the dinner thing. i start feeling gulty too.
Feathered Feathered Sep 27, 2011
@UntoldStories I kNow right? It almost makes me cry wen thinking about those poor children. But I believe they know how to live, if they ever have a family and live like an "average" person, they will have the best times. =]
UntoldStories UntoldStories Sep 27, 2011
I enjoyed reading this, so very sad and so true.. our country is filled with so many homeless people instead of just working on other countries, we need to work on our own... I loved ur poem and look forward to reading more...