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Me and Louis Tomlinsons baby boy

Me and Louis Tomlinsons baby boy

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Mrs Kiedis By MadelinMayboobear Completed

Maddy is 16 years old she has long brown curly locks and well is a single mum to a little boy named Jaxon she love her son. But also wishes the farther of him was still around Maddy never told Louis Tomlinson she was pregnant instead she broke up with him and moved to Australia what happens when she moves back to London what will happen between Maddy and Louis who were once in love are they still?
so at the beginning it may be hard to read as this is my first fanfic so please keep reading and enjoy some chapters may not have quotation marks that's only because I didn't put them in I have fixed up some chapters but haven't done some so I apologize for it now sorry :)

afraalmaz afraalmaz Jun 14, 2016
Are you like five get your spelling , grammar and punctuation together and if you don't know how to spell a word use autocorrect
1D_forever1973 1D_forever1973 Feb 09, 2014
Can you please edit and use " " when they are talking (example: "hello maddy" zayn said) thanks :)
1D_forever1973 1D_forever1973 Feb 09, 2014
It's hard to understand when someone's talking, please use these " " when someone is talking, it will be way easier to understand :)
sassygirl93 sassygirl93 Sep 22, 2013
it would make it much easier if you use quotation marks when people are talking. and if you space each time someone talks it will make it easier to read :)